DO NOT MERGE Fix other String.format issues in NetworkNotificationManager.java

Commit fb2609d3 added a string
format which caused an exception.  On top of the fixes to this
from e1406167, we can also fix
a few more issues here with some missing arguments to other
String.format invocations in the aforementioned CL, and other
formatting problems.

Bug: 33737715
Test: Build and run SUW

(cherry picked from commit 835cb496)

Change-Id: I40064d3e1a0f0300c43bdbc51839b579a5394a36